Okay, I need to give you advice.
First, I like the way you animate, like fight scenes and such, but sometimes, flashy effects aren't what you need. One example of this is in the C Symbol text, when they disapear or appear, it's in a silly little way, just a simple little effect is al you need. Also, please check your english before you finalize what the text box will be, I can understand what you are saying, but it's in an awkward way. Like when the Z Symbol had said "Hahaha! I am going to fight you now!" or something like that. It sounds more interesting with text like: "Bwahaha! I hope you are a challenge, because I've been hoping for a fight all day!" or something close to that.
Another HUGE thing you need to look out for in your movies, and SSW especially. SLOW DOWN AND DON'T JUST ADD RANDOM THINGS. Really, this is a big one. I can tell by the way you are killing off characters, that you want the series to end soon, but you can't just kill off every charcter, and adding little things like the astral sign symbols will only increase the length of the series, because you'll end up having to explain them later.
This was by no means bad, just a little too much going on, one on top of another, too fast.
20 minutes at 180 degrees celcius?
How does an oven get that hot, and how can it maintain it without melting or something? Heh, oh well. Funny movie, but why on earth did Rupee transform into that Rupee man from Tingles Rosy Rupeeland?
This movie was a little short for my tastes, but it was good anyway.
Now a question: Where did you get the Wii Shop Channel music from? I can't find it anywhere. Not on iTunes or any website.
"Yes, Vinegar" XD
...180 degrees CELCIUS is nothing special you know. It's 350 degrees FAHRENHEIT, gas mark 4!
Your guess is as good as mine.
Actually, I can't remember where I got the music from either, I just googled for Wii Music.
Spectacular, a true gem.
Wow, Rupee I love this movie, one of the best I've seen in a long time. It's funny, like all your movies (I love the Easter Eggs, btw). It just has a feeling of greatness to it that makes me want to keep watching it. Great work.
(Oh, just a question, is there a Wii Remote Clock?)
Yes, there is.
Hmm, this one is interesting.
It really didn't seem as great compared to 12 and 13. You need to include more details man! One minute Haku is sent hurtling off the screen, the next he is totally fine talking to Ginkgo. The other thing is that you killed off too many characters and didn't give good explanations. I mean, Static is good, then all of the sudden he turns evil and gets a C symbol. The other thing, is that there was no real theme around this episode. Well, besides everyone getting killed or dying. In 14 it was Flames going pyscho and everyone getting chao's. In 13 it was finding Ivy and the others. In 12 it was Ginkgos dreams. But everything happened so fast that you couldn't enjoy one part of it. The movie was also very short. You need to make it longer. But, your humour and fights were brilliant. Just try not to skip out on details next time, and you should improve.
Your fan and friend:
Lol you kind of explained what I expected you to. Especially with the fast part. There's way too many characters. The chao look aweful and I want to get rid of them. I think Sonic Cosmic Dimensions is doing better at the moment. This episode was a bit of a junk I was trying to make a car out of. If you get what I mean. Thanks for the review. Yours is the best so far
Make it a little longer, but thats the only real flaw I saw. That was a very good flash, but I still think SCD 1 was your best. However, this is very good, but, I suggest only using the textboxes in this flash, because the ones you started using in SCD are very good. And, you know I'm a stick for interactivity and humor. Add more of that. You should make the battles interactive, or give different endings. Like, you choose which attacks the characters use. But not necessarily an RPG. Just make it more interactive, and add some humour, and maybe even add a jukebox. But this was a great flash, good work Arnas.
Your #1 Fan:
You mean the text boxes were better in SCD1?
Yeah, not as good as the first.
But still really good except for two points: HUMOR AND INTERACTIVITY! How could you forget those? Yeah thats my main suggestion, besides a REAL RPG battle. Music, graphics, style, and violence were great. 5/5.
Heh serious stories have hardly any humor. Unlike SSW
Hey it's been a long time Rupee.
Hope you haven't forgot about me. Well I really enjoyed this, I see your graphics have improved, and so has your humor. I like how you turned an Anti clock day movie into pro Clock day. I still love your flashes, but you really should make a few sprite movies or something, because, the last sprite movie I saw from you was Tails and his GBA 3. You should make a follow up called Tails and his DS! Heh, or maybe I will. Oh well, Great movie Rupee, keep it up.
Fan of Clocks:
I'm never doing another sprite movie.
You know what Arnas, no, just no.
It should be illeagal to make something this good! The music was very great, and you used Spitfire! I love that song! This was a great cliffhanger and to see Flames go ballistic like that! Now for the humor. "I knew I'd get a homochao!","Take me to the car!", bwahahaha! Very very funny. Now for the suggestions. Perhaps an RPG battle or two.
Overall this was great, and keep up the good work.
Your #1 fan
Lol Thanks. You always come up with ideas XD
Eh it was ok.
But Card of sanctity makes you remove every card on your field then lets you draw 2 cards.
I hope to seeing part 2 soon.
Wow... just, wow
I don't really know if there isa anything to make this any better, you and Lukas made this masterpiece yourselves. It's great.
Perhaps tell us where you got that music? I loved it, it worked perfectly with all the events that occured.
Humor.... what to say about humor, SEXY! Lol, that was weird, but funny as heck!
Interctivity, there was a lot of it, but perhaps a few more options o where you can go.
I hope to see SSW 14 and SCD 2 in the near future.
Your #1 fan:
Yey thanks. SSW 14 is next SCD 2 is after that. The music can be found on...just google Blue Laguna and click on the site. Go to Mp3 and look for the Final Fantasy series
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